47 Peer Review Profile Essay
Peer Review Profile 1: Copy 2x and write substantive comments in at least 4 slots for each profile you review
| Essay Element | Looking good! | Needs a bit of work. Here are my suggestions . . . |
| Catchy title–either keywords or a phrase you used in the essay or the dominant impression | ||
| Introduction introduces person and will use some other technique: orient reader to the issue, give context on where/ how the interview took place, or interviewee quote | ||
| Thesis ENDS intro: one-sentence statement that sums up the interviewee’s overall perspective on this community change topic/issue | ||
| Body paragraphs are developed with enough detail | ||
| Body paragraphs are organized in a way that flows easily and is logical | ||
| Interviewer’s observations about their interviewee included seamlessly | ||
| Interviewee is presented in a ‘round’ way—real, relatable, complex | ||
| Body does NOT read like a Q & A. Few interviewer’s questions are mentioned—no more than 3. | ||
| Conclusion repeats/reflects thesis, includes some reflection on the part of the writer, and may include an optional quote from interviewee. Leaves reader with dominant impression of this person they interviewed | ||
| Works Cited for the interview AND any other sources used as part of an introductory move |
